Aphrodite in Spangles
Aphrodite in Spangles
(a quote has yet to be attributed. The Aphrodite in Spangles line comes from an Anne Carson translation of a Sappho poem that I will attribute more appropriately when I find the poem. "Paler than grass" is also a Sappho line. I was inspired to write this poem in a reading workshop taught by Judith Roche on The Love Poem)
She arrives in spangles
in her gold Chevrolet car
her nails painted blood-red
My crazy heart-my self
surrounded by night-maidens
milk blister faces
I became paler than grass after our fight
We tousled over who had more sleep
The baby woke again
that wailing mandrake girl
You once said to me
“You would wish little, be
carried sweeter.”
You did not know I'd demand
a lot of you
I was carried kicking
heavy as a mill stone
the night I was drunk
and drowning in the river
But today we love grown older
Aphrodite arrives in spangles
She is fat and good
Buddha-good
and we both laugh
When you must be gone
my mind sings much
In the dark neural pathways
of my skull, buzz a hym
as tender as a veined crocus
for our terrible animosity
those memories
leaked away
and what was left was good
caught in the light
Lucy Simpson, Seattle, 12/2008
Comments
I cannot believe no one has, of yet, commented on this Lucy!
A magical deeply personal work that I find intriguing.
I love the first stanza
but wish you had not repeated the "spangles' in stanza 6.
"as tender as a veined crocus
for our terrible animosity"
Magical!
Only a woman could have written this I suspect
but its gritty and true.
Well done
eric
Grins lucy
eleven years is a long time in these crazy days. Never forget
you have to keep working at it every day.
Trying on new artistic clothes keeps you bold and fearless.
e