Donkey Skin-Man's Coat (Work in Progress)

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How, 'Work In Progress'? I think this should stay rough and scared.

'bad as the Bay of Biscay' is lovely.

Not too long at all!

Fully loaded with morbidity and loathing.....as it should be.

Thank goodness for the heroes who reach through the dead donkey skin.

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I am once again beside myself, Lucy, you truly have such a gift.

thanks prairieplains. :)

Lucy

thanks Aubrey. I think it needs tweaking only. It felt rough and scared to write, but spot on. Thanks.

Lucy

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thanks for the beautiful comment. My husband was the man who reached through. I also had many mentors, both women and men, who have shown me a way to be. Back when I was still shaven-headed, wearing baggy men's clothes, my husband's family didn't like me, save for his granddad, who raised him. That man was the wisest patriarch, archetype of good king. My husband is growing into that. Nice to see.

Lucy

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dear lavender,

your comment is so lovely and hits "home" today. thanks.

Lucy

The power of love is amazing. Being loved, accepted, and treasured can help heal the ooziest of ugly sores. My husband has done this for me too. He's my best friend in the whole world !!
I can totally relate to being scared to write something....my uglies are so ugly no one would want to read them.....
I would not say it if it was not so true!
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Another lovely poem, Lucy. And I agree with Aubrey, you should leave this one as is. The only question I have is about the title, which is a little awkward; what about "Donkey Skin Coat"?

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