Donkey Skin-Man's Coat (Work in Progress)
Donkey Skin - Man's Coat (Work in Progress, based on Donkey Skin Tale in Andrew Lang's Fairy Book, where a father tries to marry his adopted daughter)
Donkey Skin - Man's Coat
(for my husband, Michael)
The mother dies or is absent
Maybe she drinks jug after jug
of cheapest table wine
The daughter hides in her royal chamber
cloistered in silk bed clothes
the curtains drawn
or perhaps she sits in her closet
pretending to be Amelia Earhart
in the darkness, seeing sky
The mother is laid in a grave fresh
or stops bathing
to avoid his loathsome touch
The daughter is fresh in morning
in black hat and dress
or perhaps fresh as morning in cotton
Her father weds her, bad as the Bay of Biscay
With old man ice hands he probes
to find his own boy self, lanky and pale
wedded to his own gray father
once upon the time
when he held innocence like an egg
Thus a chain of souls goes back to Lot
in certain families
a rank disease, tenacious as Virginia Creeper
The daughter, apoplectic
unable to move marmoreal limbs
or to speak
Even her own name
is a Shibboleth she cannot pronounce
gravel on her tongue
She is to blame
for her hair was unbound
for she slept naked at nine
like a white fleshen arrow
She skins a donkey
wraps herself in putrefaction
wearing death and ferocity.
Maybe she shaves her head and dons
her fathers old wool coat
with its moth balls
and is called sir or beast in 7-11
She hides herself
till one comes with courage
reaching fingers through the hide's opening
to translate her snarls and growls
to poetry
and lead her naked to the waters
Lucy Simpson
Seattle
5/2008
Comments
How, 'Work In Progress'? I think this should stay rough and scared.
'bad as the Bay of Biscay' is lovely.
Not too long at all!
Fully loaded with morbidity and loathing.....as it should be.
Thank goodness for the heroes who reach through the dead donkey skin.
thanks prairieplains. :)
Lucy
thanks Aubrey. I think it needs tweaking only. It felt rough and scared to write, but spot on. Thanks.
Lucy
thanks for the beautiful comment. My husband was the man who reached through. I also had many mentors, both women and men, who have shown me a way to be. Back when I was still shaven-headed, wearing baggy men's clothes, my husband's family didn't like me, save for his granddad, who raised him. That man was the wisest patriarch, archetype of good king. My husband is growing into that. Nice to see.
Lucy
dear lavender,
your comment is so lovely and hits "home" today. thanks.
Lucy