Jack, My Blue Eyed Boy (Jack and the Beanstalk poem revised)
Jack, My Blue Eyed Boy
I kissed him once when he was six
that giant you killed
licked the apple from his lips
He grew taller when he was eight
past the highest garden gate
taller than the eaves of houses
by the time he was twenty
I never knew where
he disappeared to
some said he ascended
like Jesus to the land beyond
shrouded in clouds
his eyes like wisps of dusk
You were so proud of spying on him
from behind the salt shaker
as he sat weeping over a porridge bowl
while the good gold harp played
The notes caressed his cochlea
Tiny moon coins shined in his palms
The goose egg, one of his nest eggs
was cool to his lips' reverence
those lips with their little heart-shaped pucker
You became a local hero
One of the giant's boots
provided housing
for an alcoholic old woman
and her scads of no-good children
who throw whiskey bottles
out the eyelets like daisies
and the body of my big fellow
is good compost for the barley
which grows taller by July
high as the leaves
whispering the sky
Your only problem
is the stalks' lamenting song
when you walk past
a tune that creeps into you
I cannot comfort you
when you have such fits
I don't really like you
my bonny Jack
Comments
Lucy, with projects at the door howling
O yes Lucy, this is really is a fantastic poem now.
The only stanza that kind of feels too talkative
is stanza 6...take another look at that, I just think its too flip
and adds nothing to the poem.
This is a brilliant work. Brilliant Lucy!
eric
Lucy, taking a much needed coffee break while children veg a bit