What Do You Do?

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I like the way this poem veers off in another direction at the end and I like God's letter and a vagina made of paper. I wonder if you are too revelatory in the third line and I wonder if the title could be better.
I agree about the title. I don't know about the crap. The "What do you do?" question has always irked me, though I am quick to ask and answer it. I feel akin to how I felt as a kid when a grown-up asked me how I liked school.

I like the way the final lines travel from reality to irony to paradox. Very graceful.

I was always willing to answer the 'What do you do' question - but I was never wholly convinced that the person asking the question was sufficiently interested in my answer. So I never said anything.

Very wise. Then you get the people who will hold your ear in an iron grip for thirty minutes. Me, always hated the question. As a SAHM, who is also a writer, what do I say? It was more of a conundrum for me.

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